friends
Friends are important part of life. The beauty of life is the person can choose his own friends because that is going to have big impact in his life. So, i agreee with the statement that having them with us will have more impact on the academic peformance.
Firstly, I think if you are choosing to be friend with that person who is very intelligent and knowledgeble also choose to study hard, by time as your friendship will grow the knowledge bases of both of you will increase. One person who choose to work hard, the second person being with that get motivates and choose to work like him. That is beauty of friendship we give a try for what our friend is doing. As both start working hard this will have huge impact on there performance not only academic but overall performance as they start working like a team. They both will teach and solve doubts of each other as there tuning matches.
Secondly, I think it can have bad impact on the student's life if he choose to be friend with the people who are not motivated to work hard and just want to have fun and choose to do the wrong things. As being with them we also choose to do same things and this can have reverse impact on the academic performance.
For example when I was in tenth grade I had my same friend circle, we guys work like a team and support each other in studying and also have fun together. But never mixed fun and work. This help me to score good marks in my tenth grade whereas my friend who left our group and choose to be with other people who is just having fun during exams this affect his scores, no doubt he was also good at study but due to his friends, his study got affected.
In conclusion, I will say people around us have huge impact in our life, friends are the closest people of our life and it will definitely have impact on the academic performance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
..., I think it can have bad impact on the students life if he choose to be friend with the...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...e bad impact on the students life if he choose to be friend with the people who are no...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 71, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'guy'
Suggestion: guy
...h grade I had my same friend circle, we guys work like a team and support each other...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, i think, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 348.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33045977011 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17670279949 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445402298851 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 461.7 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3686749936 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188752423229 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994511733852 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10827623899 0.0737576698707 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131412299975 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366735887537 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 58.1214874552 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.13 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.46 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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