computer games
In recent years, the computer games has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe that the computer games have many benefits. However, others said that they have many drawbacks.In my opinion, I think both views have several merits. Discuss below are some reasons in favor of my perspectives.
First and foremost, the people should recognize that the computer games have many advantages. Firstly, the computer games make us learn very a lot of knowledge about the world. We can learn about culture of other countries through computer games. Even we may study English with the games is builded by English speaking countries. Besides, the computer games can improve our skills. It makes increase our memory or speed hands faster. We must use our brain when we play computer games so this is very good for us.
On the other hand, there are several argument against to statement that the computer games have some advantages. They said them to be harmful for us. Firstly, we may spend too much time on playing computer games and we don’t have enough time to do anything. Further, we cannot live without playing games. This is very dangerous for our public. Moreover, Playing computer games is bad for our health. Looking at the screen makes our eyes be damaged. And the light from the computer is not good for our body.
In conclusion, the computer games have many benefits as well as many drawbacks. We should take disadvantages into account and play computer games suitably.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, look, may, moreover, so, well, i think, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91338582677 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38760620734 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551181102362 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1673699443 49.4020404114 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4285714286 106.682146367 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.0952380952 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.510326492973 0.244688304435 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.191960190426 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155152828841 0.0667982634062 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.375370298772 0.151304729494 248% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0762798244931 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.31 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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