Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
There are an increasing number of people settling abroad after graduation for professional life. There are supporters of the idea that professionals should work in the country where they are educated while opponents believe that as people can live completely different countries based on their priorities. . The second idea seems to make sense in terms of economic conditions and living standards. To clarify the two views will be evaluated as follows.
On the one hand, being educated and working in the same country easily fulfills the responsibility. Mainly because each country provides an education based on its system, which is essential for qualification. In Turkey, for example, students are getting used to professional life in a university with an internship lasting up to a year. Moreover, taking into account a lot of countries offer free education from primary to university, so professional life can be said to be a compensation. In other words, when professionally people work in the country, they not only contribute to society but also provide economically.
On the other hand, in practice people participating in the same occupational group live in places that differ mainly in terms of conditions simply because of one country. This concept motivates people to make changes in their lives for a better standard of living. Wage numbers, social rights, cultural and even
global characteristics would be great examples of these conditions. In addition to this, some professions require high-tech materials to study such as genetic engineering. However, especially for developing countries, the provision of these materials or the regular allocation of funds for these studies is considered redundant compared to the essential requirement. Indeed, such a condition has prompted experts to turn to developing countries.
In conclude, there is a question of whether it is sufficient that people should work in the country where they are trained or they can move to another country if they wish. I think everyone has the freedom to choose where they live for the reasons I mentioned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, for example, i think, in addition, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3313253012 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05401714376 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584337349398 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9283455334 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.117647059 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64705882353 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392385974131 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108444835929 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119281001021 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205949233761 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127485379305 0.056905535591 224% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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