Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers,
should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others
believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Many people think that professionals, such as doctors and engineers have to work in the country where they were studying, while others disagree with this. In my opinion, they should be free in choosing their living place.
On the one hand, professionals can make the best use of their porfessional skill if they work in the country that they are familiar with. Firstly, the classes they join may be base on that country’s issue, including social enviroment and economic development. Secondly, during the training, they will get used to the local customs and culture. If they went to anorther country, they may feel uncomfortable or even make mistakes. For instance, there are huge diffirences between east and western cultures, so if s docter treated a paitent in wrong manner, the result would be serious.
On the other hand, people have to go abroad to get training for specialist skills, especially for those who come for undeveloped country due to the lack of qualified educated. After getting proper knowledge, they could return their homeland to help folk there and developed thier country. Moreover, working in a better country may give them a chance to have a well paid job and improve their living standard.
To summary, it is understandable that professionals are experted to work in the same country, but i believe professionals migrating to other nation will be more bgeneficial for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08189655172 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82116267322 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646551724138 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9701688991 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.181818182 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.421336860046 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149096727791 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801844279672 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248187204993 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0962205034123 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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