People living in the 21st century have a better quality of life than the previous centuries.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is argued that the living standards of those living in the 21st centure are better that of those in previous eras. Personally, I think this statement is reasonable in that most people now have access to superior medical treatment and food than they could previously.
In the past, one of the most prominent reasons for the lower level of living quality was poor education. It is well-documented the only a tiny percentage of people were literate and capable of reasoning even in the most industrialized countries. This led to the low-paced development of medical technology and consequenlty poor hygiene among the general public, being attributed to high death rates and a short lifespan of 50 years old on average. Moreover, even though the arable land was much larger than it is now, a sizeable portion of world’s population were afflicted by hunger and food-related diseases, such as dysentery, due to the absence of appropriate agricultural and preservation technologies.
As for now, given the widespread implementation of compulsory education, there have been numerous scientific breakthroughs regarding medicine and food. These advancements have resulted in substantially higher crop yields and a wider range of medications, utimately alleviating global hunger and major diseases. For example, in 20th century famine and HIV were major problems in certain parts of Africa, while such issues are almost nonexistent in these areas because of the abundance of food and medicines. These achievements could not have been attained without increased level of education with time. It is, however, of note that today’s humans have been prone to more mental problems due to increased disquiets accrued from work pressure, which was not critical issue in previous centuries. Despite not being as life-threatening as other medical conditions, these mental issues certainly decrease people’s joy of life.
In conclusion, while advancements in food and medicine have demonstrably improved the average living standard, the rise of work-related anxiety and depression in the 21st century presents a new challenge demanding attention alongside the undeniable progress of our era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while, as for, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51785714286 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11477351648 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.7833576067 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.615384615 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194878788348 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622199262487 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474804565235 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11988508383 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506690110212 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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