some people believe that children should be given less responsibilities but others disagree. discuss both views
People have different views about whether children should be given fewer responsibilities or not. I believe that children should have responsibility according to their ability and age.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why some believe that children should not be given many responsibilities. The main reason is that children have less experience and are more likely to make mistakes. This situation can make them disillusioned and demotivated to work hard to progress, as making a mistake may hurt their confidence and self-esteem. Another reason is that some parents are too lenient and permissive. Such parents try to do all of their children’s activities in order not to push them. These parents usually do not give any responsibility to their children just to show that they pay attention to their children, and they try to do their best to keep their children happy.
However, I believe that if parents want to raise respectful and well-organized children, they should give them some responsibilities based on their age and abilities. Giving responsibilities to children can prepare them for their adult lives. By some defined tasks for children, they can learn about the value of some good manners, such as punctuality, being responsible, and being independent. Such children usually not only are less likely to become self-centered and selfish but also are more likely to have good communication skills for working in the team. Additionally, children who are given responsibilities become more mature and goal-oriented, and they are taught how to solve and manage their problems in the future. Nevertheless, I also disagree with giving hard tasks and responsibilities to children because this situation can cause them to think that they are not as productive as they should be, which can hurt their confidence and increase the fear of accepting responsibilities.
In conclusion, in my view, children should be given neither fewer responsibilities nor many tasks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31111111111 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26028809433 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492063492063 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5407778143 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346162327111 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14465258517 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998137752073 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273994296412 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713551152364 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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