ADVANTAGES and DISADVANTAGES OF VIDEO GAMES……….?
There is an ongoing debate among intellectuals regarding advantages and disadvantages of video games. In this regard, protagonist assert that children play games for entertainment. In summer during very hot season children play indoor video games because they feel these are better for them whereas antagonist assert that when they play video games, these have huge effect on their eyes. All the side of contention will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs in order to deduce reasonable outcomes.
Protagonist opine that playing video games at home is very good for children where they do not go outside to play substantiate their points by saying that parents can put an eagle eye on children to know what they do. Firstly, in summer, if children go outside to play, it will have negative impact on them. They may face several skin disorders if they go outside to play under sun.
However, antagonist, who believe that to play games at homes is not good for children because there are several disadvantages to spending lot of time in front of the video games, support their logic by saying citing that they have poor grade tend to spend lot of time on it and do not enough time to focus on their studies Firstly, This can lead to serious problem like, effect on behavior Secondly, they will develop series eye strain cause effect on study, These are point they discussed support their points.
At the end of recapitulating whole discussing, I conceded that parents should restrict the amount of time their children spend in front of video games.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 8.36945812808 24% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 263.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94296577947 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52692422453 2.71678728327 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532319391635 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 396.9 379.143842365 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 130.22326507 50.4703680194 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 144.444444444 104.977214359 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.2222222222 20.9669160288 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.25397266985 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197049021748 0.242375264174 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091824876306 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969224551998 0.071462118173 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125156417298 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874038797023 0.0609392437508 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 12.6369458128 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 53.1260098522 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 55.0591133005 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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