What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
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There is a going debate among intellectuals regarding in the living era new things being invented. In this regard, umpteen protagonists assert that in modern era many new things being invented to reduce human effort whereas antagonists assert when these types of things is invented human era is not responsible for its work. All side of this contention will be discussed in the upcoming paragraph will order to deduce reasonable outcomes.
People who opine that many efforts are being reduced when these types of things is been invented substantiate their point by citing that, the advancements in the workplace have reduced the human effort. Earlier, the same work which required human workforce can now be done in a fraction of seconds using machines. For instance, earlier, people used to die because of diseases such as Dengue, but now, the cure for even the biggest illnesses like Cancer is also available Firstly, due to antibiotics cure from disease Secondly, reduce human efforts.
However, there is another group of masses who profess that it can be said that the over-reliance on machinery has made people lethargic. Also, as the employers can easily replace a hundred workers with a single machine, it has resulted in unemployment among the youth. First, undoubtedly brought advancements in the medical field, but the nuclear weapons have also been invented Secondly, unemployment due to machine.
At the end of recapitulating the end of whole discussion, it is conceded by me the advantages of residing technologically sound era are many, but the disadvantages cannot be ignored as well. It all depends on humankind that how they make use of these progressions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.5418719212 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1418.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 272.0 242.827586207 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21323529412 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89024684328 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2669562032 50.4703680194 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.909090909 104.977214359 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 20.9669160288 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.25397266985 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248182320844 0.242375264174 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860309571963 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913692821285 0.071462118173 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132582361267 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925065350376 0.0609392437508 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.1260098522 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.32886699507 116% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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