Do you think extreme sports like skiing, water rafting etc. are dangerous and should be prohibited?
The importance of extreme sports, was always debated, has now become more controversial. The substantial importance of skiing and water rafting have sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on dangerous sports. It can be agreed that extreme sports have some positive impacts, but some people claim that they are dangerous for human lives. This essay will elaborate how extreme sports like skiing and water rafting and dangerous and should be prohibited and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why skiing and water rafting are fun more than risk, but the most conspicuous one steams from the fact that those sports are life long experience. For example, Water rafting gives experience of under water life such as fish, underwater plants, and different types of animals. Thus, I don't think so that skiing and water rafting are not dangerous and should not be prohibited.
At the contrary, some people adopt an opposing view and tend to believe that water rafting and skiing are only the way to death. For instance, deeper seal level, shark, and high force water are key aspects which put human's life in risk mode.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that, the impact of extreme sports like water rafting, skiing are prominent, although there are number of drawbacks, those should not be over-looked. I personally prefer those sports but need to be careful while playing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
...and different types of animals. Thus, I dont think so that skiing and water rafting ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...looked. I personally prefer those sports but need to be careful while playing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1226.0 1207.87684729 102% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04526748971 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45032616018 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.653151433 50.4703680194 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.454545455 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.25397266985 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376194974725 0.242375264174 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146059325039 0.0925447433944 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102410681169 0.071462118173 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216702755843 0.151781067708 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885227601977 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 12.6369458128 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 55.0591133005 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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