Effective learning requires time, comfort and peace so it is impossible to combine study and employment. Study and employment distract one from another. To what extent do you think the statements are realistic? Support your opinion with examples?
Nowadays, working student is very common in this modern era of globalization. As such, some countries support this combination of study and employment. this essay will discuss my opinions regarding to what extent those statement presented above are realistic and examples will be provided for better explination.
Firstly, one of the most popular country that supports study and work combination is Australia. For instance, they offer
student visa that includes working partime of casual. With this visa it attracts more student to enrol and thus leading to increase government educational profit and also increases student satisfaction.
Secondly, with this combination of work and study program, it helps student to be more mature and independent for themselves. also it supports student ability to pursue their dream on what course they will like to take for theit future. it helps the student in ways that if they have financial problems they can work and support their studies through their own income.
Lastly, most of the international students like to take this oppurtunity for them to pursue their career and to find a better future. Due to this work and study program they can reach their dreams withe their own hardwork and it is more fulfilling to graduate in the course with all the hardwork to put into it.
Overall, work and stidy programs supports students to reach their dreams and help them find a greener pasteur.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 20.9802955665 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1207.87684729 100% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14957264957 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6314412708 2.71678728327 97% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534188034188 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1380485821 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.416666667 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.25397266985 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.12807881773 145% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.33497536946 187% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133107320628 0.242375264174 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628869001332 0.0925447433944 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560435265514 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0796089350034 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523631049145 0.0609392437508 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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