Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
The importance of claiming that people spend too much time at work resulting in less time for their personal life, which has always been debatable since a long time, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of spending extra time at work has sparked a controversy over the potential impact of this trend in recent years. It can be agreed that people think spending extra hours at work will lead to success without realizing that they don't have time for themselves. This essay will elaborate on the negative aspects of cutting hours from their personal life for work and will lead to a logical conclusion.
Firstly, there are numerous reasons why spending majority of hours at work can disturb a person's personal life, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that human is a social animal and we require social interactions. For instance, Japan has a work culture where coming to office early and leaving in late hours is considered to be a success, but this results in spending less time with their family and friends. Therefore, working extra might bring more money but it can sabotage relationships.
Secondly, the key justification for upholding the notion is rooted in the fact that we live in competitive environment where everyone wants to stay on top by working extra but this can leads to various mental disorders. As an illustration, according to a survey conducted by a private organization, has proven that more than 20 percent of the workforce are suffering from some form of depression because of the extra hours spent in the workplace to achieve success. Consequently, people are not able to utilize their time properly and the additional money which they earn goes to doctors.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the role of spending unnecessary extra time at work can have disastrous effects on personal life. Hence, people need to think carefully and they should strive to achieve a healthy work-life balance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 455, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... to success without realizing that they dont have time for themselves. This essay wi...
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Line 3, column 88, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...g majority of hours at work can disturb a persons personal life, but the most conspicuous...
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Line 5, column 186, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ay on top by working extra but this can leads to various mental disorders. As an illu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 20.9802955665 114% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1659.0 1207.87684729 137% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99698795181 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71679901338 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 139.433497537 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.947402891 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.25 104.977214359 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 20.9669160288 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446059584825 0.242375264174 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.170366223154 0.0925447433944 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120210965037 0.071462118173 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281209587935 0.151781067708 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.137380272403 0.0609392437508 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.94827586207 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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