The space travel is excellent these days, but there are many environmental problems in our planet we should tackle the problems but not travel space and spend a lot of money. Discuss this opinion.
Although space tourism on the present times is supported by numerous individuals, however, others claimed that several ecological predicaments should be addressed first instead of utilizing monetary resources in this kind of opportunity. I completely assent with the foregoing argument due to the pressing condition of the biosphere that should be the priority.
To begin with, while it is true that visiting the space is an amazing experience to a person but to the point of sacrificing more essential matters in the environment is not acceptable. Space travel is merely for tourism purposes and to acquire instant government funds from wealthy and interested wanderers. Moreover, the fact that the planet needs assistance from the experts as well as substantial budget from the administration to solve issues on deteriorating environment. Hence, a more viable approach to this is take note of the priority rather than for personal gain.
Apart from this, effects of climate change for instance needs a helping hand from multitude of individuals who are concern to improve the condition of mother nature. This is not just concentrated on one aspect of science but to open everybody's mind and make contribution to protect the Earth. To illustrate, money should be spent on more significant cause like funding studies on energy efficient materials than to explore the constellations without any benefit to the entire nation.
To recapitulate, space travelling must be set aside for the greater good of many. It is only for self-satisfaction but the cost it bears can help in the resolving environmental problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ping hand from multitude of individuals who are concern to improve the condition of mot...
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Line 7, column 177, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can help in the resolving environmental problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, kind of, as well as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33203125 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09875453418 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64453125 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.116561618 50.4703680194 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 104.977214359 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.25397266985 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156400121585 0.242375264174 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546026904261 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361087867112 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897607286941 0.151781067708 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248404426833 0.0609392437508 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 12.6369458128 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 11.5310837438 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.32886699507 120% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 55.0591133005 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.