In town and cities, the large shopping mall should replace the small local shop. Do you agree or disagree?
Large shopping malls are expanding their wings in the urban world. These malls have shops that cater to everyone's needs. They provide various advantages to the inhabitants of the city however they also have some disadvantages for the local shop owners.
To commence with, large shopping malls provide a one-stop solution for everyone's needs. People can buy all type of products they need under one roof. These shopping malls also provide good and safe parking facilities to the customers. So, people can park their vehicles safely in the parking area and spend long hours in the mall. Furthermore, large shopping malls generally are weatherproof. That means people do not need to worry about summer or winter seasons.
Although large shopping malls have various advantages, they have a few disadvantages as well. These malls have an adverse effect on local business as people generally prefer to shop from the large malls. Due to this local vendors generally, observe a dip in their sales. Sometimes, they have to even shut down their business and have to search for other income options.
To conclude though, large shopping malls have an adverse effect on small shops, we cannot overlook the advantages it provides to the citizens. In my opinion, large shopping malls should replace the small local shops and government should provide some benefits to the local shop owners wherein they can rent or buy a shop in the large mall at a subsidized price. This way it will be a win-win situation for both the citizens and small shop owners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 380, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'weatherproofed'.
Suggestion: weatherproofed
...ore, large shopping malls generally are weatherproof. That means people do not need to worry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, so, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 10.5418719212 28% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 6.10837438424 147% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1207.87684729 107% => OK
No of words: 257.0 242.827586207 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01556420233 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4461125935 2.71678728327 90% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52140077821 0.580463131201 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 4.6157635468 195% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9466441019 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5625 104.977214359 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 7.25397266985 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 2.91625615764 240% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385798565165 0.242375264174 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144890270863 0.0925447433944 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116643368383 0.071462118173 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261322634725 0.151781067708 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108813833089 0.0609392437508 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 12.6369458128 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.1260098522 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.9458128079 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.32886699507 90% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.94827586207 60% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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