What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in an era in which new things are constantly being invented?
Inventing new technologies has become a controversial issue among the public all around the world. Although this issue is considered by a considerable number of inhabitatnts as thoroughy both constructive and positive, others hold opponents views. I am inclined to profoundly believe that create new facilities is beneficial as it could develop brilliant aspects for its adherents.
There are several reasons why creating new and modern inventions is advantageous. First and foremost, these features facilate our lives by provide intersting accessibilities and led to a convention feeling. For instanse, Internet is the greatest invention in this century and alter an array of things that relate to human's lives. These days loads of transformation have become diminished due to the uses of Internet. Citizens book their hotels, taxies, libaries, universities and schools online. Secondly, the modern society which has constantly invention is more convenient than the ones in the past.
On the one hand, having the constant trend in operating new facilities has some disadventages as well. One of the most significant demerits of the society which has loads of inventions is laziness. Populations in this nation due to the facilated features that new inventions provide to them, have different life style. They do their activities with these inventions and have insufficient activity which is inappropraite for their health. In addition, these invention encourage the dewllers to have secandry the style of living.
In conclusion, while the constant trend of having new inventions has some drawbacks, I much prefer using diserable features.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 341, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'load'.
Suggestion: load
...that relate to humans lives. These days loads of transformation have become diminishe...
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Line 3, column 452, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this invention' or 'these inventions'?
Suggestion: this invention; these inventions
...ropraite for their health. In addition, these invention encourage the dewllers to have secandry...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54581673307 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1080344938 2.71678728327 114% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617529880478 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 379.143842365 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.9862174733 50.4703680194 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.8 104.977214359 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.25397266985 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228175686638 0.242375264174 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747564758714 0.0925447433944 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048979264454 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136214237906 0.151781067708 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427533081929 0.0609392437508 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 55.0591133005 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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