It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it.
The heritage buildings are the pride icon for any country and its preservness and maintenance should be the debatable topic for any kind of society. The maintenance of this beautiful buildings are of course quite expensive and money should not be the matter for its caretaker or national heritage authorities. This essay will explain the importance of maintenance to this building with the different method.
First and foremost, Every beautiful thing comes with price tag and maintenance of same has to be done frequently to preserve it for a long run. The classic example is Indian national pride "The Taj Mahal" is getting care by many governors and heavy money has been spent on a daily basis to maintain its beauty forever.
Secondly, The surrounds of this building should be neat and clean and keep under monitoring regularly to attracts more tourist else people's start neglecting this heritage and this heritage can be converted into the gloomy fort. For example, The vicinity of The Taj Mahal is cleaned regularly by its staff to keep it safe and secure and
Overall the fortified of the heritage building with its beauty should not be a matter of money and has to be maintained by its normal routine by its caretakers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...its staff to keep it safe and secure and Overall the fortified of the heritage bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1038.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 208.0 242.827586207 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99038461538 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67741416251 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 139.433497537 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.580463131201 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 379.143842365 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6551724138 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.786425721 50.4703680194 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.285714286 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 20.9669160288 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1428571429 7.25397266985 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216808600761 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114351550477 0.0925447433944 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471190645342 0.071462118173 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146879709121 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641188804834 0.0609392437508 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 12.6369458128 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 53.1260098522 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.5310837438 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 55.0591133005 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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