Many people prefer to spend money and not save it. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative development?
It is stated that instead of saving money many individuals prioritize to spend it. The desire of having a better future and leading luxurious life is the main contributing factor to this phenomenon, and in my opinion, deciding whether it is a beneficial or detrimental development depends upon the purpose of spending.
Firstly, people often emphasize on expending for providing better facilities to the family members rather than saving it. In other words, they believe that by allocating money for the higher education, better housing and medical facilities, their families can live a healthy life and children would get good jobs in the adulthood, which are imperative for maintaining tranquility in the home. For instance, a Survey conducted by Association of private medical colleges in India reveals that the parents of trainee doctors have not huge funds in their bank accounts because they spend the majority of their financial assets for paying the fees of their children. Moreover, people commonly want to use the cutting edge Technologies, such as smartphones and luxury automobiles, and to satisfy this desire they spend exorbitantly.
I would argue that spending money rather than saving is beneficial only for those availing indispensable necessities for their families with it because educated children and having own residence secure future of an individual. However, splurging on unnecessary things instead of saving money could lead to financial predicaments in the old age when a person gets retired.
To conclude, people spend money for accomplishing their dreams in lieu of saving it, but I think that it is positive for only those who use it wisely for securing their future instead of doing the profligate spending.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-11-04 | ishpinder45 | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-03 | adeagboridwan | 67 | view |
| 2019-07-20 | Prabhjot Kaur Bhullar | 73 | view |
| 2019-06-26 | vadhrahmanjit@gmail.com | 67 | view |
| 2019-02-09 | ahmedarbani | 73 | view |
- Some countries encourage teenagers to have a part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Discuss both and give your opinion. 73
- Some people believe that robots are important for humans to develop their future while others think that it is a dangerous invention dangerous invention that will impact society negatively Discuss both sides and give your opinion 89
- When designing a building the intended use of the building should be taken into account rather than its outward appearance To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- In some cultures the old age is more valued while in some cultures youth is more valued Discuss both views and give your opinion 74
- Some people use Technology to take advice for their medical problems rather than seeing a doctor. what are the reasons behind this phenomenon? is this a positive or negative development according to you? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34057971014 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87342369781 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9981383225 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.777777778 106.682146367 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1111111111 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216590729242 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1081816531 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0822171258466 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150447451019 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445779231301 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 50.2224549098 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.