Whether design of building will have a positive or negative impact on people's life and work?
Recently, the phenomenon of decorated buildings and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of designing buildings is highly beneficial for people’s life and work, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that the effectiveness of building’s construction can be a plus, and I will analyse that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, construction of the building like enough space and ventilation can provide the people with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that they feel fresh and active, thus they can concentrate fully at their work. According to my own experience when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the influence of building on people’s mood. Thus, beneficial ramifications of decorating building in both increasing efficiency and feeling comfortable apparently can be seen.
From a realm of working environment, modern buildings might increase the consequences of better lifestyle. As a tangible example, some academic research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the advantages of newly design buildings is correlated positively with improving the lifestyle .Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of beneficial decorating buildings
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of the design of the buildings and houses far outweigh its drawback. Not only do the advantages of ancient house prove the significance of promoting the culture value, but also pinpoint decorating implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76153846154 5.00649968141 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.349732834 2.71678728327 123% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 139.433497537 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.494799471 50.4703680194 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 166.444444444 104.977214359 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8888888889 20.9669160288 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.25397266985 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286421442833 0.242375264174 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107576256083 0.0925447433944 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716633994486 0.071462118173 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163679892181 0.151781067708 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969488595109 0.0609392437508 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 53.1260098522 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.54236453202 223% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.72 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.32886699507 126% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.0 Out of 90
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