If you are assigned to work on climate change what will you choose to focus on and why?
Climate change is turning into a grave issue which needs to be addressed by countries all over the world collaboratively. A lot of these changes are causing due to man-made activities. If I have to choose one subject related to climate change, I would go with greenhouse effect, as it impacts our everyday life and would also try to find a way to resolve this severe threat to the environment.
Greenhouse effect is caused by the rise of carbon monoxide level in the air surrounding us.This is a by-product of gases that is constantly being emitted from transports, air-condition, smoking etc. The chloroform carbon (CFC) of air-condition is very detrimental to the ozone layer of the earth atmosphere. As a matter of fact, it creates holes in the ozone layer and imbalances the equilibrium of the atmosphere. Due to the entrapped gases, which cannot escape the earth atmosphere, the temperature begins to rise. To simplify, greenhouse effect leads towards global warming.
In order to curb this problem, it would be useful to find alternate source of transportation which does not burn energy sources like coal, gas etc. One solution could be increasing the usage of electrical cars which are not yet commercialized everywhere in the world. Raising awareness among the mass is also significant.
To sum up, it is very important to address the roots to the problem in order to resolve it and restore equilibrium in our nature. It is our responsibility to protect Mother Nature by taking responsible steps towards controlling irrational climate change.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, as a matter of fact, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 256.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09765625 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07873714963 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60546875 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5487254545 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.384615385 104.977214359 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.9669160288 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0533811686304 0.242375264174 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.017237080634 0.0925447433944 19% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270748584528 0.071462118173 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0328112700234 0.151781067708 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429837813203 0.0609392437508 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 12.6369458128 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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