Some people believe that crime is a result of social problems and poverty, others think that crime is a result of bad person’s nature. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that it is the responsibility of poverty and undesirable aspects of the community for triggering crime while others argue that this phenomenon should be attributable to human’s improper personalities. I personally think that both factors play important roles in causing illegal actions.
It is conceivable that social drawbacks and poverty could lead to people engaging in illegal activities. Firstly, there is an ever-increasing number of misleading and shallow television programs resorting to sensational criminals to increase viewership that stimulates violence and crime rate. If people watch these programs on a regular basis, they can be more likely to imitate those cases, especially teenagers, who can not have full cognitive developments at that age. Secondly, so traumatic is the social status quo that people sometimes inevitably break the law for their survival. In other words, pay gap, sexual segregation, miscarriage of justice, corruption and so on, are those which force underprivileged people to turn to crime for an income.
However, personal characteristics are undoubtedly key factors contributing to crime’s prevalence. Specifically, as opposed to the miserable who have to perpetrate a crime reluctantly, there are numerous individuals who break the law solely owing to the lack of willingness to work and earn legal income. For example, recently, several convenient stores in Viet Nam like Family Mart and Circle K have to suffer from armed burglars at an alarming rate. These culprits have many driving forces such as gambling, drugs addiction and they enjoy their comfortable, unemployed lives to the detriment of others.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that crime should not solely the matter deriving from society’s demerits, individuals’ unacceptable nature should obviously be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1604.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70818505338 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30025080474 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654804270463 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6299941427 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200933487132 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701144821867 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511844719316 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124173723868 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501148134333 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.45 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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