You are given climate as the field of study. Which area would you prefer? Explain why you picked this up the particular area for your study?
Climate change is on the rise across the globe due to deforestation and increased number of pollutants in our atmosphere. Deforestation and pollution has increased to an irreversible state in the world however, we can still control it by taking appropriate steps after intense study on climate. Hence, given climate as a field of study, I would prefer Asian subcontinent where deforestation and pollution is maximum. This area will be helpful due to myriads of reasons.
To begin with, we know that developing countries generally face a problem of deforestation which has a deleterious effect on climate. Deforestation causes excessive rainfall in various seasons which further results in flash flood. Deforestation also causes greenhouse effect due to increased amount of carbon-dioxide in the atmosphere. Moreover, countries like India, Nepal etcetera lying in Asian subcontinent also suffer with pollution. Pollution results in fog and mist in the atmosphere which in turn effects our climate.
Secondly, Asian subcontinent experiences all the seasons like summer, winter, autumn etcetera. By choosing this area, I will get a chance to study various seasons and various aspects like average rainfall, maximum or minimum temperatures during the day and night etcetera.
To recapitulate, I would choose Asian subcontinent for studying climate, as I will be able to deduce measures that we can take to preserve our environment which is continuously deteriorating due our irresponsible acts of deforestation and pollution.
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Suggestion:
...here which in turn effects our climate. Secondly, Asian subcontinent experiences...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 20.9802955665 76% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1207.87684729 108% => OK
No of words: 232.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60775862069 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27047822104 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577586206897 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0024304965 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.416666667 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.9669160288 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124849170901 0.242375264174 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495134040581 0.0925447433944 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538110087789 0.071462118173 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0783199963486 0.151781067708 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415249761279 0.0609392437508 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 53.1260098522 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.9458128079 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 11.5310837438 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.32886699507 110% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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