Essay topics: Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic?
What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
Nowadays, there is an increase in volume of people exploring the places which have hard conditions like deserts so on. While travelling to all such sites has its own merits and demerits but according to my conviction, benefits are more.
Travelling and discovering new areas is becoming passion among the large number of individuals. Internet has brought the world closer as well as providing solution to touring in a broader way. Moreover, it has become easier to find about distant unexplored places. However, trend has changed in the recent time and travelers are visiting the places which have reverse environmental conditions. It makes their journey challenging and thrilling. Similarly, their are plethora of cons in selecting such places as travel destination. Cost of travel is always nominal as such places do not face a lot of crowd. Apart from this a lot of mental as well as physical strength is achieved during these trips. People experiences change in their personality and feel more enthusiastic. Furthermore surrounding are clean and also knowledge is enhanced about different sight of the nature.
However, such uncommon places have various cons as well. Undoubtedly, there is the survival of the fittest. only. Scarcity of clean drinking water , medical facilities may result in trouble to the visitors can cause detrimental affects on the health. These
places are the storehouse of poisonous snakes and reptiles. In addition to this, high temperature results in causing dehydration to the tourists.
In conclusion, places with adverse living situations have their own advantages and negative impacts but advantages are more. Therefore, a well planned and organised visit can be memorable and amazing experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40073529412 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88251624303 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639705882353 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3999585578 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3157894737 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3157894737 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206517158408 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539469425941 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549251801172 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107074503594 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429910638805 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.