Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
While it is true that many, if not most, people believe on giving freedom to artists. However, there are those who do not support the notion, I on the other hand want artists need to have freedom to express themselves. The following essay supports the notion and derive to a reasonable conclusion.
To begin with , having the liberty to express themselves is the only way artist can use their creativity optimally. Moreover, creative ideas cannot be confined in a box , confinement not only lessen the opportunity but also do not produce the desired outcome as should have had come from artist , leading toward same stale ideas. To exemplify this, all the inventions we see, touch and use today are the result of out of box thinking and challenges creative person felt the need of.
Furthermore, when given opportunity and freedom to express news, media are outraging to collect news on every aspect of society. Because of the freedom of speech and creativity, taboo of the society and those subjects which were always hidden has been openly discussed and improvements are done which is reducing the cultural barrier and binding societies together.
To recapitulate, with freedom to express artists can contribute to art, culture and society which is only for the betterment of society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05164319249 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66608790016 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 379.143842365 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8607938709 50.4703680194 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.555555556 104.977214359 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.9669160288 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.25397266985 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26221077241 0.242375264174 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990280345292 0.0925447433944 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636764707705 0.071462118173 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143953915169 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400513945405 0.0609392437508 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 55.0591133005 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.