The movement of people from agricultural areas to cities can cause serious problems in both places. What are the serious problems and what measures can be taken the solve these problems
Migration has become biggest problem of the world. People are continually moving rural area to urban area cause of many reasons which will explain below and show some solutions for vanishing it.
There are number of critical issue which are bringing up after migration. First of all, over population are a major problem of the town cause of this people hardly get space for accommodation. For removing the land trouble government cut the forest for creating building. Polluted air and water are the another issue of cities, the numerous vehicle run the road which emit emissions gas in atmosphere. Delhi is the biggest example of pollution, where heavy number of migrate every year and purified water are decreasing there.
Rural area also faces numerous problem after migration toward urban, because farming are only way of earning of village if people move to urbanisation eventually nobody would stay for doing agriculture such as Kerala is the heaviest producer of rice and wheat in County, which cannot happen
without farmer.
Government can take several step to stopping this problem. Unemployment is first reason of people s movement to urbanisation, if country would invest highest amount of money on manufacturing industry in rural area and spend money on road transport. After taking this few step this problem will be finished. Although, other cause such as education and better luxury life also need preferences, which attracts villagers to big city. For example, student go to city for getting better education. Therefore, private company should give prefer to village for developing industry and institute such as university, shopping mall and so on.
In the conclusion, if government set up equally to small and big area. This difficult would be removed in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, therefore, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21875 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63257422471 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618055555556 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2389837444 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9375 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167553192497 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559187638933 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554611503325 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944659530088 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384517829131 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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