Some people feel that certain workers like nurses, doctors and teachers are undervalued and should be paid more, especially when other people like film actors or company bosses are paid huge sums of money that are out of proportion to the importance of the work that they do.
-How far do you agree?
-What criteria should be used to decide how much people are paid?
Nowadays various entertainment like cinema are more popular than in previous years. therefore, actors are the most paid workers in a comparison with medical or teaching staff. some people hold the opinion that this situation is injustice. others, on the contrary, maintain that creative job is difficult and must bring a lot of money. Personally, I believe, that any of these professions are important and should be well paid.
The main reason for my propensity for high salary for businesspersons, artists, teachers and doctors is that all of them are responsible for different spheres of social life. By this I mean, that doctors are responsible for nation health, teachers for knowledge of youth, owners of business provide jobs and actors for entertainment for the whole society. Consequently, from this it becomes quite evident, that the wages should be according to responsibilities.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. such as dependence of revenues on the state or commercial budget. As an example, the income of teachers working in public schools is lower than salary of tutors, who works in private schools. The same situation we can observe with doctors, nurses or other municipal workers wages. In fact, we can notice easily that in modern society government cannot provide decent income for this category of employees. therefore, to overcome these problem authorities should create a valid level of salaries for each work category.
Eventually, the question of undervalued some jobs is a difficult one to answer definitely. However, based on the reasons analyzed above I believe that country administration should do some steps to balance wages in such important spheres like medicine and teaching.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, i mean, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33818181818 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90848630081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2662853404 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.75 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186872411227 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570568867966 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432016685832 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11568888562 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766301255577 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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