Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, more and more people take their health improvement into their account and playing sports is the popular remedy. Some people opine that taking part in a team to play gain more benefits whereas others gravitate on individual sports. Each trend has its own advantages, and both will be analyzed.
For team sport perspective, it is asserted that doing sport with other members help people get more attention and stay on track. It is obvious that other people in the team will boost the awareness and the frequency of playing sports. Thus, players do not quick easily because they will cause an influence on the whole team. Furthermore, playing in a team bring people responsibility. Everyone provokes a function, creating a fabric which cannot be separated. Hence, people are likely to hone teamwork skill which is a necessary virtue in study or work environment.
In contrast, creating a playground for individual exercises bring about numerous merits in the globalization era. It is possible to plan the own schedule without any distraction. As a result, that prevent people from making an argument with other people, to the detriment of drifting relationship. some people consider playing sports as the way they enjoy their solitude and they can relax after a hard-daily grind. Moreover, playing individual sports not only foster their intellectual development but only reduce pressure from the life race.
In conclusion, although each person has their own favoritism about different genre of sports, I opine that each has its own perks and people should think about the results rather than the style of playing.
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- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football. Other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69108201144 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5449011815 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322038466281 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098140977618 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770048968578 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184634034137 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796872128413 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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