The world is becoming a smaller place because of globalization. Some people dread that culture will inevitably disappear as a result. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people agree with the idea that globalization would deprive local communities of cultural distinctiveness. Others disagree. For the following reasons, I believe that this notion may be misunderstood. First, it may be an opportunity to reevaluate one’s own culture; second, culture may be further developed by practices from other cultures.
To begin with, whereas globalization makes people similar on the surface, a trend in rediscovering one’s own local culture has been surging. Homogeneity, that some people fear, is no more than one aspect of globalization. In order to see this point clearly, let us use an example. Japanese sake which is a traditional alcoholic beverage has been drunk by choice by young people since the beginning of the 21st century. As such, sales of sake have soared in recent years. This example shows that traditional culture is being embraced by young people even in the globalized world.
In addition, various cultures around the world may be incorporated into one’s own culture. In fact, we can observe this easily in modern society. Let us take Japanese sake again as an example. The technique in making Japanese sake has not changed since ancient times. With the introduction of sommeliers from the French, who judge everything from the taste to the smell of alcohol, the quality of Japanese sake has improved dramatically. This example reveals that the emergence of practices from other cultures can improve one’s own culture.
As mentioned above, I do not agree that globalization takes away cultural originality. This is because it would be a chance to reevaluate one’s traditional culture, and it is an opportunity to develop one’s own culture as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, second, so, well, whereas, in addition, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33576642336 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04026646916 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558394160584 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 379.143842365 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6551724138 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1697779601 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 104.977214359 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 20.9669160288 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.25397266985 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119671253496 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427604715279 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503692306299 0.071462118173 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848822301053 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317769018274 0.0609392437508 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32886699507 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 55.0591133005 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 72.2222222222 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 65.0 Out of 90
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