Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
many people think due to the development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete and the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities, but I agree with this. Let's consider what are the advantages and disadvantages of that issue.
It is undeniable that the high economic development, this integration period in many countries has shopping malls appears more and more. In there, they provide almost everything people need in one area, but not removed from one place to another. The shopping in center malls is to meet the need for quality products, the best service to ensure health and life, suitable for the income of the people in that country. When they earn a lot of money, they have the right to demand for entertainment, enjoyment and how to shop saves time finding what they need and want. that is the reason small, local businesses are unable to compete.
In contrast, the development between different areas, countries not the same. So, the small, local businesses are still working. there are serves low-income and some people who required product quality and everything is not high. In some countries like Vietnam, the role of small businesses is still highly appreciated and has a great contribution to creating many new workers and contributing to the country's total income.
In conclusion, large supermarkets and local, small businesses must be developed in parallel and receive proper attention from responsible government agencies. Personally, I think that more or less of the shopping malls and small businesses subject to the development of each country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17037037037 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8104644745 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3671498448 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480281195258 0.244688304435 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165572830913 0.084324248473 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.223720612416 0.0667982634062 335% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.323846989938 0.151304729494 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237299775777 0.056905535591 417% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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