Last week you were on a flight to London. Unfortunately, when you left the plane, you left a bag. You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel.
Write a letter to the airline. Explain what has happened, describe the bag and its contents and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Unfortunately, I am writing to report a loss of my laptop bag that I forgot to pick from the over head cabin while travelling with you recently.
Last week, I traveled from london to New Delhi on 25th August, 2014 with you via flight no 121, boarding card no. AI 234. Since the flight was late and I had a very important meeting to attend. Therefore, in a hurry to get to the appointment I forgot to collect my luggage and only realized it when I got to the hotel.
Furthermore, to help you find my luggage, please take a note that the bag is a black leather Gucci branded bag and it has my personal documents, credit cards and some official papers as well. it also has a picture of my wife and daughter.
I would be grateful if you can send the luggage to my hotel. my room number is 32, and the name of the hotel is Royal Imperial hotel. it is at number 78 Williams Street, Stratford, london.
Yours faithfully,
Connor McGregor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'August 2014'.
Suggestion: August 2014
...aveled from london to New Delhi on 25th August, 2014 with you via flight no 121, boarding ca...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...cards and some official papers as well. it also has a picture of my wife and daugh...
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Line 10, column 62, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...f you can send the luggage to my hotel. my room number is 32, and the name of the ...
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Line 10, column 135, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e of the hotel is Royal Imperial hotel. it is at number 78 Williams Street, Stratf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43820224719 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5404690675 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657303370787 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.582253137 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24575702226 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722743933481 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634412060702 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141965079693 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153685614198 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.