Nowadays, people spend too much time at work to the extent that they hardly have time for their personal life. Discuss.
One of the conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that people spend more time at work that affects their personal life. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one's life. In my opinion, the excess workload has a negative impact on human's life. In this essay, I shall explain my point of view with relevant examples.
To commence with, there are a number of reasons why I am in favour of the aforementioned statement. Foremost among these, I accord that work pressure bounds an individual for a whole day to complete the work. He works like a robot until he ends his task that spoils the human relationship. For example, employees in the IT profession works late at night due to their work deadline. Hence, work pressure affects badly a human's personal life.
Probing further, excessive workload also responsible for people health as it evolves numerous diseases. Employees feel restless due to long working hours as it is the main reason for their health problems. For instance, few companies only need work on time that makes the employees exhausted that is the reason they do not perform well. Therefore, spend too much time at work can be the cause of their health problem too.
In the views of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that as we know that employees performance is the backbone of the successful organization but there is a need to care for their personal life as well as their health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 8.36945812808 12% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1207.87684729 103% => OK
No of words: 262.0 242.827586207 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75954198473 5.00649968141 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57818988987 2.71678728327 95% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 139.433497537 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 379.8 379.143842365 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.545484079 50.4703680194 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0714285714 104.977214359 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7142857143 20.9669160288 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.25397266985 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 2.75862068966 254% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376926596491 0.242375264174 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119731255635 0.0925447433944 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1055367759 0.071462118173 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211566427048 0.151781067708 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717300788544 0.0609392437508 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.5310837438 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.