Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What's your opinion? Good or bad.
Recently, the phenomenon of large shopping malls replacing small shops has sparked a heated debate. Some might argue that large shopping malls are the future and should replace smaller shops, whereas others believe that small shops are still in this day and age. I am inclined to believe that small shops are still necessary and will address this throughout the essay.
From a social standpoint, shopping malls act as a one stop shop for our daily needs, where people can buy goods and enjoy at the same time. Shopping malls ensures that there every outlet is not only hygienic but provides a great experience as well. For instance, people can find every brand in a single shopping mall which helps in completing the shopping quickly and without any hassle. Therefore, malls are great alternatives to the shops.
In spite of providing far greater options for shopping these malls are highly expensive and a substantial threat to smaller shops. Smaller shops not only sell their goods on lower price, they are also available throughout the country which makes them accessible to everyone. For example, owning a shop in a mall is expensive as compare to a small shop which increases the products cost and this higher price needs to paid by consumers. Hence, small shops are not only cost effective but they suits everyone's daily needs in a better way.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of small shops far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of these shops prove their significance, but also pinpoint long-term implications.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 493, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'suit'
Suggestion: suit
...ps are not only cost effective but they suits everyones daily needs in a better way. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1207.87684729 112% => OK
No of words: 269.0 242.827586207 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04832713755 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51167998883 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565055762082 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.7824458841 50.4703680194 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6923076923 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329314284027 0.242375264174 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134754267223 0.0925447433944 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786954902262 0.071462118173 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20227795057 0.151781067708 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875146872313 0.0609392437508 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.1260098522 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 55.0591133005 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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