People naturally resist making changes in their lives. What kind of problems can this cause? What solutions can you suggest?
People are currently against changing their own lifestyle. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.
There are some reasons why people now do not want to make a life change regardless of the world is significantly developing. One reason is that people are often scared of exposing to the risks when trying something that is not familiar with them. For example, individuals are taught to have a stable job in state-owned enterprise after graduating from formative years instead of running their own business on account of being gone out of business. Another reason is that people are toughly influenced by the environment. For instance, it is not easy to lose weight when they are asked out to the parties regularly.
Feasible solutions should be produced to tackle these aforementioned problems so that people would change their perspectives. The first measure would be the acceptation of failures. By means of seeing failure more as a learning experience than something to fear, and with the encouragements from family members or peers, people will be willing to alter. Another solution is that individuals should spend less time on social networking sites or negative people/ TV shows. This can be done by meeting up influencers, reading more self-help books, blogs that can move towards their goals.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why people today usually do not have the motivation of varying their own style, and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.
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- The bar graph below shows the number of television receivers per 1000 inhabitants in the world in 1970 and 1997 85
- In recent years the proportion of crimes committed by youngsters is on the rise and families are solely responsible for this trend Do you agree or disagree with the above statement 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12301587302 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76282540303 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4683662292 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3076923077 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204000544679 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724983862055 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566977487434 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128146457019 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436750844117 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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