Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
One of the alarming global negative trends nowadays appears to be the worsening of criminal situation, especially with young people engaged. There are several possible reasons for this situation, and a number of solutions possible.
Perhaps the major factor of increasing number of crimes is the rising social inequality. While there are a growing number of wealthy people, meaningful part of population has insufficient level of income. This inequality provokes higher number of financial violations such as robbery or theft. Another possible reason is the growing cost of higher education which leaves a lot of young people below the average level of education, income and culture. Such youngsters might become a vulnerable group tempted to commit a crime. And the third reason might be uncensored violence translated via TV, the Internet and video games. This could break immature youth personality, providing the misleading concept of criminality as an integral part of our society.
Turning to possible solutions, the first step might be considering some programs to rise the academic performance at those schools where low percentage of pupils enter colleges and Universities. At the same time, the affordability of higher education should perhaps be increased via additional financial support. The third tool to fight unemployment can be stronger collaboration between the Higher Schools and employers, to help more students find decent and consistent jobs. And additional remedy might be considering more tough standards for online, video games and TV content available for underage.
In summary, the unemployment and low level of education in some cases might become the reasons for rising violence. A complex approach to rising level of education and decreasing unemployment rate might lessen the severity of the situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, third, while, in summary, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55160142349 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89813901262 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5871886121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.33361702 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199260233953 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633197692355 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399889187955 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123617108483 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558739074691 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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