Successful sports stars and glamorous film stars are a role model for youngsters. Do you support it or not? (Agree/Disagree).
Recently, the appropriate role model for youngsters has sparked an ongoing controversy, which inevitably leads to a moot question "are sports starts and hollywood stars a role model for youngsters?" Whereas it is a widely held view that they are not the appropiriate role models for youngsters, I will discuss controversial aspects of that throughout this essay.
From the public perspective standpoint, sporting heros are bound up inextricably with endangerous activites, which indicates they lead to both more money and risky lifestyle. As a well-known example, a longitudinal study conducted by eminent scientists in 2018 demonstrates the relationship between misbehavior and antisocial behavior as well as an exponential increase in juvenile crime. Their academic criticism was impressive. Consequently, my empirical evidence presented thus far supports the contention that the likelihood of public attention is correlated positively with not only following celebtities but also national heros.
Within the realm of educational system, without the slightest doubt, positive role model attribute to successul life, in that it would come down to major achivements, carrer life, and qualification. A salient example of such attribution is movies stars, which is a cause for concern since it was mistaken to take fashion for granted. Had there been a paradigm shift earlier, scholars might have had the opportunity to pinpoint juvenile magazines problems. Hence, it is reasonable to infer the pivotal role of mass media.
To conclude, as for myself, as the saying goes "all's well that ends well," after analyzing what elaborated above, I firmly believe that the sports starts and hollywood stars are a role model for youngsters. However, with the benefit of hindsight, we conceive the more we research, the further we discover.
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &apos
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, so, thus, well, whereas, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1207.87684729 131% => OK
No of words: 280.0 242.827586207 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66428571429 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17454600643 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 139.433497537 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667857142857 0.580463131201 115% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 379.143842365 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1905863446 50.4703680194 173% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.181818182 104.977214359 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4545454545 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.25397266985 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229302220096 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063463997108 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864915162524 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135271068962 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887198176613 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 53.1260098522 71% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 11.5310837438 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.32886699507 128% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 55.0591133005 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 22.0 9.94827586207 221% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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