Formal education and experience.
The importance of formal education which was always debatable has now become more controversial with ,any people claiming influence of students life has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of the trend on books in the best experience to gain the skills over the recent years. I agreed that formal education is the best experience in the students. This essay will elaborate my views discuss both the aspects and will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are many benefits coves of traditionally education, but the most prominent one stems for the fact of, the teacher role is very significant, but the most significant one stems from the fact traditional eduction increase the knowledge, enhance our communication skills and academic subject which started the, therefore, the plays the traditional role.
Nevertheless, some adopt an opposing view and tends to believe that, there are some benefits effect of experience, but the some alarming one stems from the fact that experience is very important in formal education. Therefore, experience matter in books and students. For instance, hence, the experience plays crucial role.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that the impacts of formal education and experience are prominent, although, there is number of experience should not be overlooked.
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
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Message: Did you mean 'same'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 5.75862068966 330% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 213.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87415984521 2.71678728327 106% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591549295775 0.580463131201 102% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6551724138 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.247471881 50.4703680194 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 143.25 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.9669160288 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.25397266985 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.33497536946 56% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197754812787 0.242375264174 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905034076029 0.0925447433944 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106854566814 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109725214579 0.151781067708 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692682203997 0.0609392437508 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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