The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?
In this hour of information technology, people are more concerned about keeping themselves fit both mentally and physically. Although some people believe that following regular exercise the most effective way to build up healthy body and mind, I consider a healthy diet and keeping sound relationship also have a major role in making one alive and kicking.
To begin with, the majority of individuals have blind trust in regular practices like attending martial arts and sports etcetera. I'm other words, the physically demanding cavities have been proven as the finest way to bring fitness as people are aware of the success stories of great warriors and players, for instance. Those legends have gone through physically demanding activities that lead them to succeed in both personal and professional lives.
However, it could be utter foolishness to believe that exercises only serve to the best to the health of individuals. To put it in another way, instead of having preferred unhealthy food items, making sure the healthy alternative on proper timings makes one stable physically better than exercises. Hence, people are greedy to consume international food which destroys one's metabolism and digestion system.
Moreover, keeping a sound relationship is the most discarded health contributing factor among the majority. To put it in another way, if an individual has broken connection or is jealous, angry or greedy about others those will harm only his or her mind unlikely to others. So, gradually their issues will lead one to have a so-called disorder like depression, substance abuse and may end up in serious mental problems. So people have to practice the qualities like regular meditations, forgiveness, love and affection towards others.
In conclusion, by analysing all the contributing factors of well-being, following healthy cuisines, sound social connections followed by the proper exercises bring the quality of healthy life.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47039473684 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84374762184 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5589477517 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.923076923 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0810589228564 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03007441345 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405833149095 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0459214417361 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260816433432 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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