Society should identify those children who have special talents and provide training for them at an early age to develop their talents.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
Every society has young children, future pillor of nation. The author recommends that it is the responsibility of society to identify children with special talents and to provide them special training for the development of their talents. The given topic is highly contentious because different people have different opinions on the given topic. some people may go for the topic, but some people may stand completely against the given topic. I mostly agree with the given topic for the following reasons.
First of all, society has responsibility to identify child with special abilities and assist them , otherwise several talents may lost. For instance, Leonal Messi ( football star), was born on poor family. during his early age, suffered from a disease that needs large amount of money to cure. His parents were unable to pay that large amount of money. A football club- barcelona football club- identify his special talents and sponsored all his medical cost required to cure his disease, as a result, he become free from that disease later. Baercelona, further provide training to him from his early age, so he became able to pursue his dream and is known as the the most successful football player of the world. if the barcelona didn't sponsor his cost then the society will lost such a prodigious player.
furthermore, children with special talents should be identify and provide them training at an early ag, so that their abilities can be improved. For example, Gynandra Mall is a famous athletic player of Nepal, who won gold medal more than 8 times in south asian game. it is required to provide training to an earlier age for the athletics for their better performance in later life, if training is not provide at an earlier age then the good athletic player can not be produced. Hence it is the responsibility of the society to recognize youth with special talents during their earlier age.
However, under certain circumstances, some special talents may develop at later part of the life. Say, Pasupati Shrma- folk singer- was started singing at an 25 years of age but is able to keep his position above others singer in folk songs. so, it is not possible to identify all the child with great talents at an earlier age. furthermore, when training is provided to an earlier age, then the child may feel bore, as a result, declining his interest in that sector.
In a nutshell, although, under certain circumstances, it is hard to find child with special talents at an earlier age due to the development of some talents at later part of the life, it is the responsibility of the society to identify children with special talents at an earlier age and to assist them and provide special training so that their abilities will not lost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example, for instance, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 58.6224719101 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2308.0 2235.4752809 103% => OK
No of words: 467.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94218415418 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57540954262 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 215.323595506 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.436830835118 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 711.9 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9717481351 60.3974514979 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.904761905 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2380952381 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.21951772744 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 7.80617977528 256% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358684472812 0.243740707755 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119365848634 0.0831039109588 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116268841173 0.0758088955206 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226560610943 0.150359130593 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806449007354 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 14.1392134831 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.