Saving money is a good habit for an individual after retirement. Do you agree or disagree?
Money is an essential necessity for the survival of human being. Each penny earned by a person should be save appropriately which could result in a stable livelihood after retirement. Hence, money saving is an upright principle for an individual to lead a finer life after retirement.
To begin with, each person has dreamt dreams about their superior future and family life which makes everyone ambitious to make the goals by different earning strategies. Each penny saved is earned by years of struggles and hard work of an individual which would be to meet different purposes before or after retirement. As an illustration, as the age goes up more and more commitments would arise such as education of children, marriage, health issues as well as miscellaneous expenses, where money plays a crucial role. A person who does not invested his income properly would suffer to serve the different personal requirements and it would end up in depending on bank loans or others which would create problems in future.
Moreover, plenty of organisations have strict retirement age where people cannot work after particular age in those organisations. For further survival retired people depends on their savings to meet their requirements or to set up business. To clarify further, in case of a pharmacist who worked for an organisation for decades put money in to savings or investments would help him/her to start a pharmacy store to meet the daily bread after their retirement. Thus, saving the money earned throughout the career would be boon for individual and his family.
However, some people does not follow the principle of fund saving for the reason that, life is short and unpredictable hence, the daily earnings must be used lavishly to lead a posh life which could bring great socio-economic status in the society.
In conclusion, money is a reward of lifetime hard work of an individual. Some believe that, money earned is to lead a luxurious life than saving it for retirement life. However, a person who keep-up money-saving habits would lead a successful life with their family after retirement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'saved'?
Suggestion: saved
...Each penny earned by a person should be save appropriately which could result in a s...
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Line 5, column 717, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s or others which would create problems in future. Moreover, plenty of organisations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13832853026 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84049002684 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512968299712 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4893873459 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.866666667 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1333333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297131045102 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129559678293 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100098635062 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199034381737 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114280082105 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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