Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Relationship plays an important role in people's life. we are not live alone in the world in entire our lives and we make different relationships during this time. Relationships affects in all aspects of our life, so having a good and happy relationship requires some considerations. Some people belive that always telling telling the truth is the most consideration in any relationships, whether others not. In my view, telling the truth is important for two main reasons.
First, telling the truth make people more trustworthy. It strengthens the relationship between people. Forexample, I had a friend when I was a student at university, she was always pretending that she loves me and we are the best friends in the world, but when it came to profit, she hid the truth from me and after a while our friendship was broken. As you see, telling the truth is important.
Second, when people always telling the truth in their relationships, it would help them to be less stressfull and upset. I think when people hide something from somebody who is closed to, it make them nervous and stressfull. Being nervous has a negative effect on the psyche and behavior. Forexample, when I was young I did not tell the truth about something important to my mom, and I was upset and worry for a long time. I could not look straight at my mother's eyes and I was always feeling that I'm not deserving her love untill I told her the truth. This experience thaught me to be ohnest and telling the truth every time.
To wrap it up, if you want to have a perfect relationship with anyone you love and being more trustworthy or less stressfull, try to tell the truth all the time and make it the most important concideration in your relationships.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'worry' does not normally take the preposition 'for'. Did you mean 'worry about'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, then, while, i think, in my view, to tell the truth
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71052631579 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86947711125 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529605263158 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.2993353307 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437849880173 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14865595126 0.076458572812 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10933490116 0.0737576698707 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256031438066 0.150856017488 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101697270121 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 86.8835125448 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.