Task 2 : Some people think the newly built houses should be as same as the old house style in local areas. Others argue that local authorities should allow people to build houses in their own styles.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
These days, people have different views about which kinds of style that local government should enable inhabitants to construct their buildings, the old house style or people’s own styles. While I accept that there are a great deal of benefits that the old sample can brings, I would aslo argue that their own styles can have a lot of advantages.
On the one hand, building in the old style can bring two advantages. The first is that it can generate profits by preserving local tradition. There are a great amount of characteristics that have existed for a long time in the old house style, so they can become the local feature and attract a lot of attention from visitors. For instance, all buidings in Hoi An are really well-known for historic beauty, and there are thousands Vietnamese people and foreigners visit there per year. The second benefit is no wealth gap. Because externally, all buildings are the same, so people will not disdain each other. Due to this, individuals are likely to become closer
However, I believe that people should be allowed to construct their houses in their own styles for two reasons. The first reason is that it shows their creativities. New buildings can be built by a large numbers of different styles which are insteresting and sole, so their local areas will be more colorful and creative instead of one-style areas. Easily to look for is the second reason. Because each building is each style, so it is not difficult to recognise. For example, a relative can come to their house with a sole descripsion
In conclusion, I think local government ought to allow people to build houses in their own styles
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'amounts'?
Suggestion: amounts
...ving local tradition. There are a great amount of characteristics that have existed fo...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tors. For instance, all buidings in Hoi An are really well-known for historic beauty, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e to their house with a sole descripsion In conclusion, I think local government ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, really, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83098591549 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61506667137 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524647887324 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.60230473 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426648768407 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136899927942 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120090678206 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.318004151648 0.151304729494 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908924556848 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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