Some people prefer to raise children in the cities while others believe that children should be raised in the countryside.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Children can easily adapt to any environment. However, there is a matter of great interest whether to raise children in cities or in the countryside. I understand that there are positive sides to both views. Though, I prefer most to raise children in the countryside. Let me outline the reasons for this.
City living is convenient in many aspects because cities are developing much faster than villages. Therefore, for busy parents, it is easy to raise their children in the city. To elaborate, education and childcare facilities are increasingly common in metropolitan areas and working parents can easily arrange such services to their children. Moreover, standards of schools, quality of education, and healthcare facilities are better compared to villages.
Nevertheless, when it comes to healthy foods and good environment, there is no better place than the countryside to raise up children. In fact, calm and easy-going village lifestyle help to develop good manners and virtues of children. In contrast, in the cities, they learn to follow the rat-race from early childhood. In addition, in many cases children can live with their grandparents when they are in the countryside. Which in fact an excellent opportunity for them to enjoy their life. furthermore, if children were to bring up in the cities, they would have to spend a good amount of their time in a limited space, which can detrimentally affect their health and well-being.
Although there are fewer facilities in the village, living in a good and happy environment is crucial for children.
In the final analysis, although cities provide good facilities and convenience for parents, to bring up children, the countryside is the best place because of the calm and good environment and love of grandparents.
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...llow the rat-race from early childhood. In addition, in many cases children can li...
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...portunity for them to enjoy their life. furthermore, if children were to bring up in the ci...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in addition, in contrast, in fact, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25874125874 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97556350792 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527972027972 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9974768656 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4705882353 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8235294118 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220399244053 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081024488481 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745782477887 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132046042627 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067754923773 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.