More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?
[8/7, 8:42 AM] Kiran Patel: It is irrefutable that health has become a great concern for us. In order to be healthy and fit, myriads of people make a decision to eat healthy and do daily exercise. There are several reasons behind this trend as to become stronger and look sexy. This essay will also highlights practical steps to motivate people to pursue this trend.
[8/7, 8:50 AM] Kiran Patel: To embark on it, many causes will explain why individuals want to eat healthy food and do some physical exercise. Firstly, they want to look lean and fit. What I mean, some people are suffering from obesity problems and having irregular eating patterns. Hence, they want to change their eating patterns and body shape. Owing to awareness, they know the benefits of nutritious food and workouts. Moreover, lean body shape will definitely augment their confidence level. As a result, they can achieve anything in life with good physique. Secondly, some people want to get jobs like police or army, which demand good body shape. Since they want to get the jobs, they will have to eat more vegetables and do workouts as well.
[8/7, 9:01 AM] Kiran Patel: On the other hand, encouraging people towards eat healthy and regular exercise can be done by taking some crucial methods. First and foremost, spreading awareness in folks. In other words, having knowledge about healthy lifestyle, people will absolutely gain confidence to pursue this trend. Another is, since government should ban fast foods and sugary drinks, people will go for nutrition based food. Furthermore, authorities should organise various events related to physical exercise like a yoga. Consequently, these events would stimulate individuals to do any kind of exercise. These steps can help people to achieve their goal of healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, desire of having good body and dream of getting jobs of people will only be done by pursuing habits of eating healthy and doing everyday workouts. However, above mention steps can provide motivation to folks to follow this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: highlight
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, i mean, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07692307692 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42950394291 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5525865518 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.0 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345611461866 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846009401307 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699394418087 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201931290668 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449369847428 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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