Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits, and TV channels.
To consider current scenario, vogue, culture, certain television programs, and trade name are followed by masses from different countries to each other. Advantages of this phenomenon are comparatively more than disadvantages that will be discussed in ensuing paragraphs.
To begin, it has certain advantages that could be put forth. The first and foremost one is that fall in price of products.To explain, nowadays, foreign companies are established in other countries to become wealthy and well-known in order that they produce products at the cheapest level which is affordable to every person.As a result, life standard of masses can be increased and they are able to live convenient life which want to everyone. Not only that, but also countries can be benefited with the product that it does not produce.For instance, Apple company which produce a sophisticated mobile phones in America so that it expands their business all over the world.Thus, it become easy for people any corner of the world to buy it.
On the contrary, garden has not only flower but also weed similarly , it has disadvantages as well.The first disadvantages is that local producers make lose out of this.To explain, certain foreign product is cheaper than local; consequently, people purchase that manufacturing which afford them.Therefore, local producer may lost their business For example, nowadays MI brand which produce cheaper mobile phones compare to Indian brands such as Intex, Micromax; therefore, they get falling in their business.What is more, countries might lose its cultural values.In other words, people are following different culture such as dance, clothing style, and music;As a result, their own traditional culture might be extinct.Hence, there are certain disadvantages which is explained above that is not overlooked.
To recapitulate, gaining dissimilar culture is good for community provided that they live with own culture and consider its value
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, look, may, similarly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51803278689 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94484339314 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590163934426 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 244.249287175 49.4020404114 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.428571429 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.5714285714 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.5714285714 7.06120827912 376% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106643266499 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450926653585 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477890465015 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0570873588784 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355854778575 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.0946893788 202% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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