Some people think that living in the city is becoming difficulties. Others believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
One of the most controversial issues today relates to the migration to urban areas in search of a better future. Many people think that life in the city is more and more convenient nowadays, while others strongly believe that living in the city will meet plenty of obstacles. From my perspective, people living in megapolises could face various challenges. In the following paragraphs, this essay intends to delve into both conflicting sides.
To begin with, there is no denying that numerous people are attracted by city life because of its benefits and attraction. It is true that there are multiple qualified educational institutions in the city, thus, thousands of students prefer studying in the city. Moreover, living in the city provides a huge amount of job satisfaction and a great income that the primary reason why several fresh graduates intend to live in a big city. Entertainings, last but not least, are one of the main fascinations of city life because there are several amusement parks, pubs, bars, movie theaters, and scored of entertaining places.
Urban life, however, creates an abundance of dilemmas. Take traffic congestion as an example, overpopulation in metropolises triggers an enormous burden on infrastructure at peak hour that put residents under a mass of strain. Another point worth noting is migrants have to deal with the lack of necessities such as electricity and clean water due to living in rundown-neighborhood. Besides, the high living expense is also a difficulty for low-income migrators. Owning to the lack of appropriate qualifications, people moving from rural areas can not look for decent careers, thus, they have to work as blue-collar workers, consequently, they can not afford expensive living costs due to the low income.
In conclusion, from the afore-mentioned discussed, this issue has both benefits and drawbacks. Thus, authorities should pose measures to solve these problems. Pesonally, I totally agree with the idea that people will face a variety of difficulties if they move to urban areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s can not look for decent careers, thus, they have to work as blue-collar workers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, however, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26219512195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11589542237 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9755799741 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.875 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181623633811 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498713599156 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524663396981 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102862174995 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482440077044 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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