In some countries, young people have become richer, healthier, and live longer, but they are less happy.
What are the causes?
What can be done to address this situation?
Juveniles have become less delighted, although they are more prosperous, have longer expectancy and better health condition. This essay will suggest that it is because they are increasingly relying on smartphones and technology and that the best solution is to enhance the importance of thinking positively and enjoying the moments within youth life
Technology reliance is the primary reason why youngsters today become less joyful despite being more financially stable and in better shape. The allure of smartphones and modern devices can cause juveniles spending too much time on it, lead to the lack of interaction with surrounding people and diminish the appeal of travelling and exploring new things, which keep them from being bored. As a result, youngsters will enjoy doing things soletarily and have a tendency to be isolated in life. For example, UK recently found that 60% of teenagers who are experiencing depression spend up to 8 hours a day playing games and using social media sites.
The most optimal solution for this precadiment is a public campaign underlining the positive outlook of young people on life. That is to say that TV, smartphones and laptop are wasting too much time of them, yet youth is the most beautiful time in life and should be spent on adventuring and creating memorable experiences with friends and accquaintances. An awareness campaign could shed some light on this difficult situation and allow adolescents to become as happy as those in the past. For example, a similar initiative in Japan resulted in a 56% decrease in teenagers feeling lonely and losing movivation in life
In conclusion, young people are less excited about life although the standard of living is inproving because of the overuse of technology equipments, still this could be addressed through an public campaign emphasising the vital of thinking postitively
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 189, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, for example, in conclusion, as a result, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25249169435 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85088552226 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.663110067 49.4020404114 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.666666667 106.682146367 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4444444444 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227790957417 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0885749868699 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542673563321 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133608608965 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210817178507 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.0 13.0946893788 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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