In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is suggested that in the near future, printed newspaper or books will totally be superseded by online news and e-books that are offered free of charge. From my perspective, I support this idea since all the advantages of electronic books and newspaper are of benefit to both people and the environment.
To start with, online news and books are economically beneficial and available on every website on the Internet. With an incredible speed of updating the most recent news and the latest release of books , it is understandable that lots of newsagents are now on the verge of bankruptcy. Beside the up-to-the-minute news and episodes that the Internet provides, e-books are far more portable because they are all contained in a small size of a smart phone which allows people to keep updated whenever and wherever they want. On the contrary, paper books are larger so it is inconvenient for people to have to carry it along in their bag. In addition, it is not only on the house but e-books or e-newspaper also enables them to download it without needing to pay a penny so they can read it even with the absence of the Wifi.
What is more, online versions offer more diverse topics and the permission to give comments and feedbacks for readers compared to a narrow range in a printed paper. Such apps like Baomoi or Wattpad provides a host of types for audiences with different interests to choose and because they are able to express their thoughts about the quality of the content, a growing number of them reported feeling satisfied when their opinions are appreciated. Furthermore, more online versions mean less environmental contamination. Averagely, around 17 billion cubic feet of trees deforested each year and the purpose of chopping them down for producing paper is partly to blame. Therefore, choosing to read books and newspapers online is a practical way of protecting our breath and the ecosystem.
In conclusion, although a lot of people still maintain the habit of reading paper books, this type will sooner or later be superseded by the online version which are not only financially beneficial but also environmentally friendly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the quality of the content, a growing number of them reported feeling satisfie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, still, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary, to start with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9756097561 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84726875651 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571815718157 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8021268976 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.142857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293439359268 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861851084554 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733597641133 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131372986869 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760884730655 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.