Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think students should spend time on more important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions about studying the science of food and its preparation. While some people believe that this is a waste of time, which should be spent on more important subjects, i agree that food science and preparation should form an integral part of the student curriculum.
On the one hand, Concentrating on more important subjects could support students in terms of their career prospect. First of all, Students who spend time on more important subjects raise the prospect of seeking the competitive dream job. Many important subjects such as computer science, finance, engineering or information technology are the highlighted point in the requirement of many jobs, because nations nowadays tend to invest in the new age of technology and industrialization, and therefore are in need of high-qualified workers, namely well-educated engineers or tech-savvy employees. For example, the job like bankers which have a highly competitive salary in the job market demands that students should be capable of not only financial knowledge but also logical thinking.
On the other hand, possessing a solid understanding of food and cooking can ensure not only healthier eating habits but also serve as a basic survival skill. Firstly, students can control their eating habits. For example, students who have versatile knowledge relating to nutrients are inclined to avoid precooked or packed meals due to ingredients containing sodium, sugar and high fat in favour of more organic food. As a result, although many students these days adopt a sedentary lifestyle, they are able to manage their weight because they have more control over what they are putting into their body. Finally, cooking is considered a survival skill, because they can easily adapt to an environment with no ready-made food supply. If a human has enough ability to survive in any conditions, they will be independent have a high sense of confidence which is one of the elements to succeed on the career path.
In conclusion, while some people suppose more important subjects should be prioritized in schools, I strongly believe that students should take the time to focus on the study of food for more healthy eating habits and lifestyles.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1879.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27808988764 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87748372266 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558988764045 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.4777670355 49.4020404114 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.538461538 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3846153846 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318984530068 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118997159659 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105088311193 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240000927801 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112869594078 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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