Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choises.to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In this modern era, people opine that they are presented with a wide array of choice and I am very passionate about this opinion. This essay will explain and set examples of why I strongly agree with that statement.
To begin with, I agree because there are several causes. First, in this sophisticated era provides a plethora of occupations. They just have to pick off regarding to what they want. However, sometimes people got less difficulties. To illustrate, when anyone desire job, they tend to be confused to choose a company because many companies provides job opportunities with a good salary and good position as well. the option is in their hands now, they just have to decide. In contras with the past, where people are difficult to find a work because companies just accepted they who had a good education.
Furthermore, government make room for people, for example students, they are able to chose the best university even that is in abroad. Because administrator contributes scholarships to learners, all they had to pick what scholarships and colleges they wanted to pursue to further their education. People also can select the types of transportations. In the past, most people still walked due to lack of the transportation but nowadays, many kinds of the transportation that they are able to use, such as trains, airplanes, even they bought vehicle and used it to go anywhere.
To conclude, current, too many choice which is chosen by people. Likewise, government is opening many opportunities for the people. As a result, people have the number of options in their hands.
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...se, such as trains, airplanes, even they bought vehicle and used it to go anywher...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, likewise, regarding, so, still, well, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0037593985 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89724771487 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.6711125167 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189280804568 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068350250362 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040395295213 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127300838093 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508118036136 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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