Some people argue that immigrants should adopt the local culture when immigrating to a new country. An alternative view is that they can adapt to a new environment by establishing a minority community. Discuss these two views and give your opinion
Over the decades, waves of immigration blooming all over the world. Some people think that new immigrants should integrate and assimilate into the new country while others claim that they may create a new minority community. Personally, a minority group is a good way to preserve the culture.
On the one hand, newcomers usually adopt the culture, values, and social behaviors of the host nation when they are immigrating to a new country. These actions help them easily integrate, understand how their new country works and get benefits from citizenship status and develop a career. With the success of new entrants and locals, the economy and society will maintain and get more achievements. Secondly, assimilation will decline some concerns like discrimination and a tinge of ethnic bias of the locals for newcomers. Therefore, conflict will be curbed and the solidarity between locals and immigrants will increase to a higher level.
On the other hand, building a minority community has become a new trend in some recent years. They tend to maintain a significant level of their cultural heritage when they are living in the dominant country and gradually create a minority group in this new country with a distinctive culture. With the view of integration without assimilation, these communities contribute to the rich diversity of a successful society in the host country. For example, after many years of living and working in Czech, communities of Vietnamese were certified as a minority community in 2015 and they really created a new community with significant Vietnamese culture. Secondly, minority groups play a virtual background for newcomers when they come to a new country. These groups help them have more motivation and are ready to integrate, develop and achieve success. Their success in many fields will attract the host nation to the motherland and may think about the investment in their own country in economy or other fields.
In conclusion, immigrants should adopt the new culture or build a new minority community, still a must contested notion in many developed countries over the decades. And I believe that the minority community will bring more significant values for the host nations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1871.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24089635854 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82618755763 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3084130932 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.058823529 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338025502802 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109303126012 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0799180114003 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227678257484 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294189952505 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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