Some people argue that the government should spend money only on medical care and education but not on theatres or sport stadiums. Do you agree or disagree?
To develop a country, the fields invested by the government are always a matter of concern of citizens. Many people contend that education and medical care deserve a higher investment than other fields while the others believe the nation budget should be allocated for arts and sports as well. In my opinion, I think that the authorities should have an important action in investing for both fields to develop the country.
First of all, education and medical care play a pivotal role in the country’s progression. Education equips people with fundamental knowledge of various fields, helps them to raise their awareness, shape people’s mindset and behaviors. Therefore, they are able to become a highly qualified workforce that meet industry demands and contribute to the development of the country and society as well. Furthermore, investment should be poured into medical care which is regarded as a cornerstone to develop country because it is a field that ensures people’s health and protect people against lethal diseases like covid19, strokes, cancer, and depression. Once citizens are physical toned, they will be able to study and work devotedly and join hands to foster the country’s growth.
On the other hand, people think that the government should allocate a certain proportion of the nation budget for arts and sports for some reasons. Firstly, sports can brings far-reaching benefits for both people’s physical and mental health like boosting their overall health through different activities, minimizing the risks of dangerous diseases and promoting the valuable life skills like leadership, teamwork, confidence for youngsters. Through sports competitions, the nation’s image can be introduced to the international friends. Besides that, art or theaters contribute to the country’s progression as well. Art is undoubtedly the best way to ensure the mental health for locals, develop tourism and promote the national worldwide.
In conclusion, although people believe that education and medical care should be focused more than arts and sports, I believe that both fields are of paramount of importance and thereby deserve equal investment.
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| 2021-06-18 | phuchannn | 73 | view |
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... medical care play a pivotal role in the country’s progression. Education equips ...
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...ountry and society as well. Furthermore, investment should be poured into medical...
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...mount of importance and thereby deserve equal investment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, while, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51796407186 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83661265054 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547904191617 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2669385158 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.642857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186853395547 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677927622898 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603476230408 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122825955054 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019343658235 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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