It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Taking risk in both in career and their own life is important because if bearing risk will only progress your life this contains both advantages and disadvantages inherited ,to my opinion benefits are more compared to the drawbacks of taking risk .
To begin with the benefits of taking risk in both work and own life is need to be encouraged, because if they don’t face the problems arised by the endangering risks and getting away from the situation they might end up in standing in the same stall throughout their life. Apparently bearing the perlis and tedious situations gives you confidence, willpower,desire to succeed and liable qualities required for life , for instance Thomas Alva Edison the founder Of electric bulb was criticized by others that he could not invent bulb, but in the end of his experiments he succeeded and got fame and recoginition from the world andd also succeeded in his own life by getting rich , so risk taking in both personal life and professional life will surely lead to success.
Secondly, to outwit the disadvantages is amount of few stones compared to a hill it includes failure ,bankruptcy ,losing inner peace ,moreover taking risk reflects that either he may succeed in professional and may fail in his personal life or vice versa of the situation, to take into account Albert Einstien was a successful scientist due to threats he faced and although he got popularity he was quite failed in his personal life which was described by him in the last notes of his diary ,however so on consideration of the drawbacks a persons emotional stability and prosperity is collapsed.
In conclusion we render that the advantages are more in contrast with the negatives faced by the risk tolerances and about three fouth is success rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96644295302 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81780459526 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570469798658 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 166.118030328 49.4020404114 336% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 296.0 106.682146367 277% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.6 20.7667163134 287% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272811748145 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162546834023 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907961100946 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177091173306 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985294857976 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.8 13.0946893788 243% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 11.59 50.2224549098 23% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 11.3001002004 233% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.8 8.58950901804 126% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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